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Simone @ Hokitika School
Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Hokitika Primary School in Hokitika, New Zealand.
Monday, November 2, 2020
Monday, July 27, 2020
Quality Blog Comment
We have the power to make people feel great with our positive comments, so we need to make sure we don’t upset the blogger with a negative comment. We used the programme Make Beliefs Comix to make a comic strip about a quality blog comment. It was fun but a little bit challenging to make the comic strip. Have a read of our comic strips. Do they make you feel proud?
Monday, June 8, 2020
persuasive writing
Kia ora, over the past few weeks in class we have been learning about persuasive writing below is my persuasive writing I hope you enjoy reading it.
Did you know that most primary schools spend about $2210 a year on sport equipment?
Hi my name is Simone and i am going to be talking to you about students stop breaking sport equipment at school and why should we stop that ?
If we started fixing our sports equipment we will save money and have more equipment. People will have more equipment because there will be more equipment in school. Some people might say that it is easier to replace broken equipment. But that would cost the school more money , can you imagine all the broken equipment we would have to fix? We will have no money left so what do you think ?
I think if we learn how to fix the broken equipment we will have more equipment and have more fun!!. And we will be learning what to do if it breaks next time.
Thank you for listening to my persuasive writing. I hope I managed to convince you on persuasive writing today.
Did you know that most primary schools spend about $2210 a year on sport equipment?
Hi my name is Simone and i am going to be talking to you about students stop breaking sport equipment at school and why should we stop that ?
If we started fixing our sports equipment we will save money and have more equipment. People will have more equipment because there will be more equipment in school. Some people might say that it is easier to replace broken equipment. But that would cost the school more money , can you imagine all the broken equipment we would have to fix? We will have no money left so what do you think ?
I think if we learn how to fix the broken equipment we will have more equipment and have more fun!!. And we will be learning what to do if it breaks next time.
Thank you for listening to my persuasive writing. I hope I managed to convince you on persuasive writing today.
Thursday, April 23, 2020
Wednesday, April 22, 2020
Tuesday, April 21, 2020
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